I posted the first draft of my trailer onto Facebook so that I could gain some audience feedback.
After looking at the comments on the Facebook page about the first draft of the trailer. I realised that there was still adjustments I needed to make in order to create a professional trailer. I will use the criticism to add more footage with different locations, footage of Alba ignoring messages and including opening and closing screens.
I also showed a group of people the trailer and asked them to suggest improvements I could make so that I had different peoples opinions. They said that I should:
- Slow down the editing of Theo walking
- More footage from London
- Sort out the sound - videos that haven't been muted
- The change of music where they argue needs to be more clear
- Have footage of Alba ignoring his messages
- Review the music at the end
- More of an explanation of the story line (argument)
- Use some point of view shots
- Inter-titles
- Bookmark the ending - use hashtags, coming soon etc.
- Make another institution for the beginning
- Maybe use another voice-over
- When Theo types the text messages they appear as he's typing them
- Add in a shot of Alba in the bath so it looks like they're together
- Add in a inter-title between Alba walking and me
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